Surprising Find

Setting: at home

Plot: a surprising find

Technique: alliteration

Example: Creak! The door protested as I pushed it open to step into the gloomy storeroom. I was fetching some batteries for my brother. His muffled voice floated up the stairs. “Look in the brown box!” he said. I found the box and opened it. Suddenly, something big, black and furry jumped out. Shrieking with fright, I stumbled backwards and crashed into my grandfather’s tarnished Taekwondo trophies.